Question by Take My Dreams: What is a good title for my story of forbidden love? Yeah, this is my third (and last) time I’m posting this question. I’m not asking for you to critique/remark at the plot-line, I’m simply asking you as the title of this question implies–a title for my story of forbidden ...
Question by fousiya b: Story Question, help with English Work? How can I improve my tiny story. ALL criticism is welcome. In a car The air is hot and angry with fury, thrashing at my face as I roll down the windows of my ’86 Carolla. I lay across the backseat with my head resting ...
Question by яαιηвσω: Can anyone give me some constructive criticism for the beginning of this story? I couldn’t believe it when I saw it. There must have been a large number of people that felt that way, the crowd around it was so big that you only got glimpses of it standing as far back ...
Question by KIng: True story i need help? BACK THEN: I was 17 and had a friend named “Jen” who i truly cared for & had feelings for but she just tended to lead me on & broke my heart, and treated me like a carpet to having me cry for her. On top of ...
Question by Sange: Inequality Story Problem Flaw? Working inequalities in class and I think I’ve come across a flawed question and I want to know if anyone else sees the problem in this. The story problem is verbatim… “After a serious automobile accident, most insurance companies will replace the damaged car with a new one ...
Question by KIng: based on a true story help? BACK THEN: I was 17 and had a friend named “Jen” who i truly cared for & had feelings for but she just tended to lead me on & break my heart, and treat me like a carpet. On top of that she had a boyfriend ...